Site: A Moment Like This
Ordered a Review On: July 31, 2007
Reviewed On: August 7, 2007
Score:
Quality of Layout (3/5)
I like the colors of both of the layouts. They are really pastely (if that is a word!). he aren't too bright nor are they too dull - they are just right! The image is saved as a .gif and that is probably why the qualitys are not that good. Next time, maybe try to save them as .png. Even though the size is bigger, the quality is much better!
Layout Design (18/20)
I love how you have just a simple blend and then you put a texture over it. It makes it more exciting than having plain images! The reason why you got an 18 is because of the stylesheets. They are the same for both of the skins and you should have changed up the colors to have them match the layouts. The other thing that bothered me was the "Enter" page. You could just put the skins links on one of the layouts - that one would be the index - and link to the other skin and the current one. Take MileyFans.net as an example! =D
Content Originality (15/20)
Kelly
I like what you did in the Biography section. You used some information from the net and then put alot of it in your own word. Smart thinking!! =D Since you have a "Demand Kelly" page, I don't think that it is much necessary on the "Enter" page. The "Kelly's Journal" page is kind of out-dated because the last journal update was in December 2006. Maybe this page isn't necessary anymore?? Kelly Articles is also out-dated and may not be needed anymore. The "Kelly Links" page is good. It gives the visitors a variety of other Kelly sites! Um... the "Shop Kelly" page isn't working. You should fix that! I love the "Past Appearances" page. It shows us where we can see Kelly in different shows!
Site
The "Why Kelly?" page could be more in-depth. Maybe you could fix that possibly?? It's nice that you have some info about yourself for your visitors. It shows them like who you are! The "Apply for Staff" page is good and doesn't need to be changed! You were really in-depth. The "Awards" page is also very good! =P
Media
I love how the "Lyrics" section opens up in a new page with a new layout. It makes it more organized this way! I don't really see the purpose of the "Professional Covers" page. It doesn't have a purpose to me!! I love how you have links to watch Kelly's different videos! It is great for visitors who aren't allowed to download anything. For the "Signatures/Banners" you could have some blends that are more up-to-date, if you know what I mean! =P For the avatars, you only have 1 and you could add more so that the visitors have more of a variety!! You don't have any AIM icons up and you could add some soon??
Interact
I love the whole "Visitor Map" thing! It is really original and you can see where all your visitors are around the world!! With the polls, maybe you could have more than 1. Possibly you could have about 5 so that the visitors will interact more?! The "Dress Like Kelly" page is good. It shows the visitors where they can get some clothes so that they can dress like Kelly! The "Kelly Doll" page is amazing!! Your doll looks exactly like her in the picture. It is also nice that you showed your vistors how to make one! =D
WWW
You don't have that much affiliates. Maybe you should visit more sites and apply for affiliates at their sites to get more affies! "Apply for Affiliates" is good. It is good that you have alot of rules that your affies have to follow. You have a good variety of link us buttons for your affiliates. But, maybe you could add some 88x31 buttons too!
Lyrics
I already went over this in the "Media" review section...
Gallery
Maybe it isn't a good idea to make the visitors sign up right when the enter your gallery. Maybe you should have it so that the visitors will sign up if the want to. Not just because the have too!
Myspace
I love that you have a Myspace for your site! It lets your visitors interact more with you other than on your site!! =D
Spelling and Grammar (13/15)
You are pretty good with the spelling. he only thing is that you don't tend to capitalize in the right places and use sentence-breaks where you need them. You do this the most in your updates. Maybe go over your update a few times to check for errors before you make an update!
Site/WWW Page (14/15)
Just read the "Content Originality" section about the Site and the WWW page and that about sums it all up! No need to post it twice!! =P
Attitude (15/15)
Your attitude is absolutely phenomenal towards your visitors!! You are really nice to them! =D
Suggestions
-- Change the colors in the stylesheet for the different skins to match them.
-- Save your images as .png for better quality.
-- Get rid of the "Enter" page.
-- Put the links of the different skins on one of your layouts so the visitors can pick which one the like. Take MileyFans.net as an example!
-- Review your updates before you actually do update.
-- Apply for affiliates at more sites.